[quote=@Leidenschaft]
Looks fine. And in addition to being pretty close to Hank's character, it bears pretty striking similarities with Dervish's as well. Course, I tend to maintain that a good story is a good story. I like it, I think Trius and Karth could get along, similar personalities.
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I noticed that too. Apparently we all had good ideas at the same time.