[quote=@Nightknight]
Edited the appearance description for my character. Also, what changes should I make to make my character viable for play as a hero? I don't like playing villains too much. ): 
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Your character seems kind of OP for this setting, tbh. From among the wind powers, freezing breath, and paralysis breath, I'd suggest only keeping [b][u][i]one[/i][/u][/b] of those.

Ice breath makes the most sense to keep, given his weakness to heat. I'd get rid of the paralysis breath for sure. Think about it: oh no, bad guy! Just breath in his general direction. Problems solved without killing the poor dude. Not even Solid Snake would approve of such a thing.