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Burth's the only one asking, but I have no complaints about your writing either.  You characterize decently well, with enough detail, strong verbs, and varied sentence structure to keep it interesting, and you clearly pay attention to your grammar, punctuation, capitalization, and spelling.  You sometimes switch between past tense and present tense for no immediately obvious reason, which can be somewhat jolting, and you still use a bunch of passive verbs that could be changed into anything more interesting without too much difficulty.  All in all, you're a good Casual writer.  Fun to RP with and exhibiting competence, but perhaps in need of more editing to make sure everything's the best it could be.
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That makes sense. They're all first drafts.

As for the tense switching... I think I use it as action vs. reaction? I don't notice tense all that much, myself. x:

Well, it's not that I don't notice it. More like... I dunno. *shrugs*