[b](@All)[/b] Why you hooligans making me read all these long apps. It's 11 pm here and I'm being flooded with high quality writing. Also, my backspace key is sticking which is driving me nuts. Luckily I have a Red Bull for the morning. The girlfriend is out of town so I have way to much time to cuddle with my SKS, trying to decipher which sounds are wind and which ones are intruders trying to break in. 

[@rechonq] Good to go.

[@Massasauga] Cleared for flight mini-me.

[@Evil Snowman] Thanks for keeping me in the loop big sexy.

[@Obscene Symphony] Even though your signature suggests that bread is a bad thing, in which case I should have you immediately escorted from this thread for crimes against culinary kind, I have read you app and I like it. [b][i]Mostly.[/i][/b] One your first trait, moving the rest of your body parts can have a slightly increased speed, not vastly. No Deus Ex neck-snaps at 40mph for you. That second trait makes me a bit iffy. I'm not necessarily saying you need to change it or get rid of it, but I'll be watching you closely. Also, for where you said she's growing out of the prosthetics, it's only been 1 year since the escape, not 5. I'll be watching you closely. If you have any question as to if something you wanted to do with one of your traits would be OP, message me first. If you go ahead and do it and I catch wind of it I'll just let it stay, but your character may be punished, [b]severely[/b]. But overall, your app gave me a writers boner. GG.

[@MinervianGrey] I like you bud, but that app is a bit too over the top. Not necessarily from the second trait, but the first. Traits can only be towards one thing, like higher cognitive function OR increased physical abilities. Plus, the second trait must be relate-able to the first. With you first trait it looks like it is increasing you mental and physical atonement. If you wanted to change that to just mental, then overall it would be fine, because it would make sense that your GMG has increased mental functions, which then allows her second traits, hearing, feeling ect, to work, but on a physical level she is still a normal girl. Having both and once would probably put her as one of the experiments that didn't make it. Gotta remember the project got cut short by the girls escape, all the girls are just test subjects/rejects, not final products. Also, your app needs a bit more fine-tuning on things like appearance, just a bit more details for me to get the idea of what your character is like. Let me know if you need help on anything. I cant wait to see the final product! As for multiples, lets start out with one now, and I'll see how well I can handle things in the RP, then go from there.

[@Kokushi] I'm surprised you were even able to find the thread if [@Foster] told you about it. He probably gave you the coordinates to a geo-chache containing this threads URL on a map made out of stale pizza and the elastic from his old underwear. But no matter how you got here, I like your app, you're in.