[quote=@User] IM BRINGING THE VOID GUN! [/quote] DON'T YOU DARE. [quote=@FateWeaver] Here's what I've got so far, but I have to get some sleep soon. [hider=WIP] [sub]- - - - (Personal Details)[/sub] [b]First Name:[/b] Alexander [b]Last Name:[/b] Valerian [b]Age:[/b] 27 [b]Sex:[/b] Male [b]Home Nation:[/b] Teknoh [b]Appearance:[/b] <1-2 paragraphs minimum. You can also provide a picture if you're like. We just need to know what your character's hair, face, and body look like> [b]Personality:[/b] <1-2 paragraphs. You can expand on this in-character, but please provide a basic understanding of how your character acts> [b]History:[/b] <1-2 paragraphs is fine, but I encourage you to expand on this as much as possible> [b]Occupation:[/b] Diver [sub]- - - - (Power Matrix)[/sub] [b]Primary Focus:[/b] Ki [b]Magical Capabilities:[/b] [list] [*][i]Stoneskin[/i] - Alexander’s flesh is tougher than that of a normal human, a product if the concentration of Ki within his flesh. He can also focus on one portion of his anatomy at a time (head, chest, arms, core, or legs) to increase his durability even further. While it doesn’t make him anywhere near invincible, he could stop a light blade or strike easily. [*][i]Reactive Ki[/i] - The more abuse Alexander takes, physically and mentally, the more efficiently he can channel his Ki towards increasing his physical attributes. He does this instinctively, making it appear that he naturally becomes stronger and faster as he takes more hits. [*][i]Barrier[/i] - To protect himself from magic or projectile weapons, Alexander manifests his Arcane energy into a barrier of raw force. This barrier is at maximum six feet long and high and can be of any basic shape, including concave and convex. When something strikes it, it sheds the excess energy as light and heat. Alex can only create one barrier at a time, and the centerpoint of it must be within two feet of him. [*][i]Kinetomancy[/i] - Alexander harnesses his magic to create effects brought about by raw, physical force. Due to their nature, these abilities have a very limited effective range. Beyond two yards much of the force is lost, resulting in little more than a light shove for the next yard before fading completely.[/list] [b]Body Modifications:[/b] None [b]Weapons and Equipment:[/b] Alexander relies only on his body and magic for combat. Aside from that, he has a simple leather pack with a single strap. He uses it to store equipment, loot, and food. [b]Specialties:[/b] [/hider] [/quote] [hider=Evaluation] [list] [*][i]Stoneskin[/i] - Alexander’s flesh is tougher than that of a normal human, a product if the concentration of Ki within his flesh. He can also focus on one portion of his anatomy at a time (head, chest, arms, core, or legs) to increase his durability even further. While it doesn’t make him anywhere near invincible, he could stop a light blade or strike easily. [color=ed1c24]This is acceptable, but be careful about just how hard you make your skin. Although Ki can change your body's structure harmlessly and fluidly, it can't change the fact that you skin is still [i]skin.[/i][/color] [*][i]Reactive Ki[/i] - The more abuse Alexander takes, physically and mentally, the more efficiently he can channel his Ki towards increasing his physical attributes. He does this instinctively, making it appear that he naturally becomes stronger and faster as he takes more hits. [color=ed1c24]This is fine, but Ki overuse can easily drain a person's energy over a long period of time. Although Ki is essentially infinite, it does have limits. Just make sure you don't go overboard with this, and it's good to go.[/color] [*][i]Barrier[/i] - To protect himself from magic or projectile weapons, Alexander manifests his Arcane energy into a barrier of raw force. This barrier is at maximum six feet long and high and can be of any basic shape, including concave and convex. When something strikes it, it sheds the excess energy as light and heat. Alex can only create one barrier at a time, and the centerpoint of it must be within two feet of him. [color=ed1c24]This is good, but be aware that your barriers might not be strong enough to protect you from all forms of attacks. Also, consider your specialization. Try not to spam barriers too much, at risk of using up your energy supply[/color] [*][i]Kinetomancy[/i] - Alexander harnesses his magic to create effects brought about by raw, physical force. Due to their nature, these abilities have a very limited effective range. Beyond two yards much of the force is lost, resulting in little more than a light shove for the next yard before fading completely. [color=ed1c24]So basically force-pushes away from his body, yea? This is good.[/color][/list][/hider] I'm ok with what you have so far! Looks like he's turning out pretty good. Finish it up and I'll give it a final evaluation, as will my Co-GM [@Unfortunately] We'll have plenty of spots open, trust me.