[quote=@Jensoman]
OKAY BROS HERES MY SHEET


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[sub]- - - - (Personal Details)[/sub]
[b]First Name:[/b]  Jenso
[color=mediumaquamarine]No, you don't need a last name if you're cool enough. Or if you just don't have one for some reason, for example, breaking off family ties. It's usually preferred, but it's easy enough to let slide.[/color]
[b]Age:[/b] 22
[b]Sex:[/b] Male
[b]Home Nation:[/b] Arcadia
[b]Appearance:[/b] [img]http://i.imgur.com/I0NCWfO.png[/img]

[b]Personality:[/b] He is a cheerful and nice person. He enjoys adventure and some combat along the way. He will do his best to protect those he cares about. He isn't one to start fights, but certainly would never back down from one. He respects strong opponents.
[color=mediumaquamarine]The protagonist shows his true form! Pretty simple, but not sure exactly how you would elaborate on this. Maybe some negative personality traits as well?[/color]
[b]History:[/b] Jenso had always been told within Arcadia that Divers were the scum of society, as they would venture into the lands beyond recklessly. He was always fascinated by them, however, wanting to discover what was within these large unexplored lands.
[color=mediumaquamarine]This needs a little bit more to it.[/color]

[sub]- - - - (Power Matrix)[/sub]
[b]Primary Focus:[/b] Ki
[b]Magical Capabilities:[/b]
- Due to the high Ki within his body, he has super strength and high durability. This is not quite the same as a body mod however, as bones in his body can still break when hit by a strong attack. It would take more force to break them, though.
[color=mediumaquamarine]A body mod would likely be a lot more specific than the most basic side effect of high Ki, which is enhanced durability and strength. The not-a-body-mod part doesn't need to be specified.[/color]

-Flame manipulation. 
- He is able to absorb any flame attacks with his palms.  He can absorb flames from all over his body, but only those that he creates from his own arcane network. Besides this, he can still be hurt by other flame attacks, as flames that are not part of his arcane network can still burn him.
[color=mediumaquamarine]So he can absorb ANY fire attack with his palms, but fire from other sources can still hurt other parts of him? Elaborate a bit.[/color]
- Able to use flames to make a flame hammer that inflicts both physical and burning damage.
[color=mediumaquamarine]Seems legit. Very basic explanation on what exactly the "hammer" is though. Might want to add size, shape, etc.[/color]
- Some Ki abilities(which he obviously won't have access to yet)
[b]Weapons and Equipment:[/b] Plenty of bandages.
[b]Specialties:[/b] Fist to fist combat. Close combat is usually something he is great at, while the control over his flame powers are decent at best.
[color=mediumaquamarine]Fist to fist as in specifically a boxer, or do you mean basic martial arts, including kicking, etc?[/color]
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Notes in [color=mediumaquamarine]blue-ish color.[/color] A bit of spice, but the base framework is acceptable to me. You'll have to pass the Tex filter too though.