[quote=@Jensoman]
THANKS FOR REVIEWING MAN!

I HAVE EDITED MY POST AND SHALL REPOST IT KING HATMAN


[hider=Jenso]
[sub]- - - - (Personal Details)[/sub]
[b]First Name:[/b]  Jenso
[b]Age:[/b] 22
[b]Sex:[/b] Male
[b]Home Nation:[/b] Arcadia
[b]Appearance:[/b] [img]http://i.imgur.com/I0NCWfO.png[/img]

[b]Personality:[/b] He is a cheerful and nice person. He enjoys adventure and some combat along the way. He will do his best to protect those he cares about. He isn't one to start fights, but certainly would never back down from one. He respects strong opponents. He tends to be somewhat careless and hold back when entering combat with a new foe however, which could end up badly for him. He only gets serious when he really needs too. He is usually not one to kill, but will do so if absolutely nessecary.
[b]History:[/b] Jenso had always been told within Arcadia that Divers were the scum of society, as they would venture into the lands beyond recklessly. He was always fascinated by them, however, wanting to discover what was within these large unexplored lands. He is intrigued by all the things that can be found. If he were to find a powerful relic or certain info, he would make sure it would not end up with the wrong person.

[sub]- - - - (Power Matrix)[/sub]
[b]Primary Focus:[/b] Ki
[b]Magical Capabilities:[/b]
- Due to the high Ki within his body, he has super strength and high durability.
-Flame manipulation. 
- He is able to absorb any flame attacks with his palms.  He can absorb flames from all over his body, but only those that he creates from his own arcane network. Besides this, he can still be hurt by any flame attacks, as flames that are not part of his arcane network can still burn him.
- Able to use flames to make a flame hammer that inflicts both physical and burning damage. The handle would be 122 centimeters, the hammerhead's height would be 51 cm and the length would be 75 cm.
- Some Ki abilities(which he obviously won't have access to yet)
[b]Weapons and Equipment:[/b] Plenty of bandages, and a backpack of basic supplies.
[b]Specialties:[/b] Basic martial arts.
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[hider=evaluation]- Due to the high Ki within his body, he has super strength and high durability.
[color=ed1c24]This is fine, but if you have an excessive amount of Ki, be sure to keep your arcane abilities under control.[/color]
-Flame manipulation. 
[color=ed1c24]Make sure you clarify that you can create flames as well, because manipulation and creation are two totally different things.[/color]
- He is able to absorb any flame attacks with his palms.  He can absorb flames from all over his body, but only those that he creates from his own arcane network. Besides this, he can still be hurt by any flame attacks, as flames that are not part of his arcane network can still burn him.
[color=ed1c24]Flame absorption is fine.[/color]
- Able to use flames to make a flame hammer that inflicts both physical and burning damage. The handle would be 122 centimeters, the hammerhead's height would be 51 cm and the length would be 75 cm.
[color=ed1c24]If you're making the hammer, and not summoning it, then you can simply state 'fire solidification' and specify the capabilities of the material, including how strong, light, and malleable it is.[/color]
- Some Ki abilities(which he obviously won't have access to yet)
[color=ed1c24]Remove this for now. You can learn how to use more Ki-based stuff later on, I assure you.[/color][/hider]

Looking good for the most part. Just tweak the things I mentioned slightly and it's accepted. You can post it in the characters thread afterwards.