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[@HushedWhispers]thanks im glad you think so, i always trip out writing posts cuz i get worried it might be bad. ._.
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The thing about writing is, you can only get better if you [i]keep[/i] writing. You may not see the difference now, but you will (i s2g i look back on my writing 2 years ago, and i [i]cringe[/i]).

Also, don't hesitate to ask people what you think you could improve on. People you trust, that is. Good friends who value your friendship. Lol. I know that's how I improved.

Asked someone what they thought about a post, and they told me, 'you use too many adverbs and adjectives, cut back; you're suffocating your sentences,' and I think, despite my still flowery writing, I've improved on that immensely. ;o

I think, in anything I've heard, the thing holding you back is usually yourself. You aren't asking yourself enough, 'what am I doing wrong?' and more, 'what are they doing wrong/thinking wrong about me?' (Don't judge me, but that's how it is in a lot of video games. People get mad at other people, when it's themselves they need to pay attention to. That goes for a lot of things in life, though, including writing, imho!)

Regardless, don't trip out about your writing. If you're proof reading and you keep changing things, you have to stop yourself at some point because you're either going to scrap everything and change it again or you're going to quit. I do that too much. I look back at my writing and I come at with a machete and I don't stop until I'm satisfied, and that's never. Literally. I always find something wrong and you always will, so stop for a moment and just post what you have. Trust me, it'll be fine, more than fine most of the time.

Edit: A good thing to do, as well, is to look back at some posts and allow yourself to be proud of what you wrote, no matter how large, how intricate, or how detailed it is. Let yourself have a moment like, "Holy shit I [i]wrote[/i] that," because that will definitely help with your own confidence in your own writing.

But I mean, this helps for me; people are different, so *shrug* you find out what helps you out the most and stick to it. ;D