Hey [@Ambra], I dunno if you saw my submissions in the PM I sent you, I'll go ahead and post them up here for everyone to see. If any one at all has some feedback or criticism on my characters, feel free to offer it up! I'm fairly new to serious RPing, so any and all help would be appreciated. [hider=Vicki Victory] [center][h1][color=ed145b]Vicki Victory[/color][/h1] [b]Username:[/b] punchbuggi [b]Age:[/b] 24 [b]Gender:[/b] Female [b]Main:[/b] Vi [b]Appearance:[/b] [IMG]http://data.whicdn.com/images/12349589/anime-art-artistic-attitude-blonde-hair-blue-Favim.com-40499_large.jpg[/IMG] She has a muscular, well-toned build and stands at around 5’7” [b]True Appearance:[/b] Vi’s gauntlets appear on her arms, as well as a metal pack on her back connected to the gauntlets. This pack helps Vicki suspend the gauntlets, and they also have jet boosters sticking out to propel her quickly, as well as allowing for short-term flight. Vicki’s hair also grows longer with more streaks of pink appearing. [b]Powers:[/b] -[i]Blast Shield[/i]: Vicki can slam her fists together to temporarily create a force barrier. Usable outside of her True Form. -[i]Vault Breaker[/i] As Vicki winds up a powerful punch, her gauntlet increases in size before blasting forward for a single, devastating blow. Only usable in True Form. -[i]Denting Blows[/i] Vicki gains superhuman strength and durability. This doesn’t use up Vicki’s prana, but she’s still prone to fatigue and exhaustion like anyone else. Usable outside of her True Form. Strength is vastly increased in True Form. -[i]Excessive Force[/i] Vicki punches a foe or object, damaging it, as well as sending out a shockwave that damages anyone or anything behind it. Vicki can also punch the ground to send out a shockwave all around her. Usable outside of her True Form. -[i]Assault & Battery[/i] Vicki boosts forward as she winds up a powerful punch, activating her shield for protection during the charge. Her gauntlet increases in size before letting loose a powerful uppercut. Only usable in True Form. [b]Personality:[/b] Vicki oozes with confidence, this is her defining characteristic. There are very few things she has failed at in life, but not from things being handed to her. She has worked for and earned everything she owns and has accomplished. Vicki is never content with herself. She must always push herself further, become better. Not just in boxing, but in every area of her life. She must be funnier, more likeable, prettier, a better, more efficient business woman, she must be more loving and caring, more selfless, more everything. Constantly seeking out challenges for herself leads to Vicki being knocked down by life very often. She is not the type to simply lie down and give up, she will always rise up to the occasion. Her hard-headed attitude can get her and those around her into unnecessary situations, though. Vicki has exceptionally high standards for herself, and expects everyone else to be their best as well. Her constant pushing of herself doesn't detract from her personality though. She is magnetic, charismatic, and easily liked by everyone. [b]Short Biography:[/b] Vicki is the daughter of retired, world-renowned boxer, Victor Victory. He won't tell his daughter if that's their real name or not, but Vicki’s certain it isn't. Her father always did have a penchant for the theatrical. After retirement, Victor opened up his own boxing gym, teaching others the ways of a champ. Vicki never botheres going to college after high school, as she works in and helps run her father’s gym. She hasn't also taken after her father’s passion for boxing, spending even her free time there to hone her skills. Being the daughter of a legend, most people would feel crushed under the weight of the pressure to accomplish something equally as amazing as their celebrity parents. Vicki simply looks at it as an opportunity to cast her own shadow further than her father ever did. Due to the competitive nature and high learning curve of League of Legends, Vicki took to the game very easily and plays at least one game a night. Her main? Obviously Vi.[/center] [/hider] [hider=Raze Colter][center] [h1][color=82ca9d]Raze Colter[/color][/h1] [b]Username:[/b] XxDarkKnightxX [b]Age:[/b] 28 [b]Gender:[/b] Male [b]Main:[/b] Hecarim [b]Appearance:[/b] Raze is a tall man, standing at approximately 6’3”. Despite his height, Raze’s build is fairly average. He is neither skinny nor heavy, neither scrawny nor muscular. His hair is jet-black and wavy. It is long, extending down below his ears, and is typically unkempt, even while he is at work. Raze always looks exhausted. Not from lack of sleep, but from world-weariness. He looks like a man that has given up on life, his neck and head tilted down. As he walks, his fists are always clenched. Not tightly, but just enough to cup his thumbs. His usual attire consists of wrinkled suits, mainly of black or grey colors. [b]True Appearance:[/b] [IMG]http://41.media.tumblr.com/75828958782c46fa12edc85ed808be54/tumblr_n1o49itVyw1ryrblpo1_1280.jpg[/IMG] [b]Powers:[/b] -[i]Warpath[/i]: Raze is naturally able to run faster than normal, topping out at 60 mph. -[i]Rampage:[/i] Raze is able to summon Hecarim’s glaive at will, using it with Hecarim’s skill and experience. Additionally, the longer Raze is in combat, the stronger his blows become. -[i]Spirit of Dread:[/i] Raze absorbs the prana of nearby beings, using it to restore his own prana, as well as heal his injuries -[i]Devastating Charge:[/i] Only able to use this in his True Form, Raze boosts his running speed even further, gathering more momentum for a devastating blow. Only sufficient force or an immovable object could hope to stop his charge. -[i]Onslaught of Shadows:[/i] Only able to use this in his True Form, Raze summons Ghost-warriors to fight by his side. If Raze activates this while already using Devastating Charge, his velocity will increase to sound Barrier-breaking speeds, and end his charge with an explosion of spectral energy. Only an immovable object could hope to stop this move. [b]Personality:[/b] Raze is extremely distrusting of people, only seeing the bad in the world and the people that inhabit it. He is a short-tempered individual, becoming a loud and outspoken man after years of keeping quiet under his parents and peers. Raze never made the conscious decision to be selfish, but typically only takes action if it will benefit him in some way. He is impatient and tackles conflict head on, hating to leave anything unattended to. Raze is indeed a cynicist and keeps people at arm’s length, but some small part of him deep down inside hopes that there is good somewhere in humanity. [b]Short Biography:[/b] Raze’s past has been fraught with backstabbing and betrayal against him. At every turn, his attempts to forgive, forget, and reconcile have been met with more and more reason to distrust those around him, leading him to conclude that man was selfish and untrustworthy, and that Raze should simply respond by acting in kind. Raze’s parents were both very successful and accomplished professionals in their fields. This allowed Raze to live a very comfortable childhood, but left them with hardly any time to actually spend together. One day, Raze came down the stairs to find all of his belongings packed into bags. He was unceremoniously being shipped off to a private school on the other side of the country. With his underdeveloped social skills and care for others, Raze had a difficult time making friends. The one person he thought would be his friend ended up leading him to some back alley to be mugged. Finishing with high school, Raze went off to the University of Darkwell, studying Psychology, and earning his doctorate and certification by age 26. He opened his own practice to help others escape from their suffering, but he only became more and more jaded as people shared the terrible things they had done with him. Things looked like they would turn around when he finally met the love of his life. At age 27, he proposed, and she said yes. The month before their wedding though, Raze caught her cheating on him with one of her coworkers. Using entertainment as a means of escape, Raze has been an avid gamer since a young age. Upon its release, Raze became enthralled with the game League of Legends and plays it to this day.[/center][/hider] Assuming Ambra allows me to join this, I look forward to RPing with you all!