[hider=Arion Kreyul] Name: Arion Kreyul Age: 17 Appearance: He has Brown hair and kind looking grey eyes, he is pale and has a rather thin and somewhat small physique being 5'11 ft tall Fighting Style: He has a Multitude of styles but mostly likes to fight stylishly. Magic: Sensus - He can mess with his senses and other senses as well allowing him to scan other people and make others think and see something else, he heightened his senses to the point where he can interact with the dead. He is reliant on making his senses better than others. Weapon: Knives with wires and gauntlets and boots Advantages: He is efficient at close ranged combat and he is quick on his feet and calculative on his strikes and gets around with a knife attached to a wire. Disadvantages: He is Magic only works at the otherworld and seeing the dead only happens in the otherworld, he is reliant on his magic and using to much can hurt him through "Cracks" Personality: He doesnt care what others say of him and he is very Blunt and cold about things, he also does requests for other people that are good in his eyes. He is a delinquent like character with a strong caring mother side. History: He was a psychic or Spiritualist when he was young, he lived with his sister and was working in a Shop set up by their mother and thats how they get around, the weapons come from a present of their late father which was all his belongings and through a message, he learned of his ability. Likes: Cooking, Drawing, Knitting, sewing, Training, Thinking of new devices and weapons, high places, forrests, Cats, His twin sister. Dislikes: His twin Sister getting hurt, His tools and materials getting lost, tight spaces, forrest fires. Personal Strengths: He is very good at his hobbies and fighting and likes to keep his promises. Personal Weaknesses: He is not good at first impressions and may tend to be hot headed. Other: He is a trained fighter. [/hider] Is this better ?[@chukklehed]