Apart from the year it took us to do it, Episode 1 was pretty good. A bit confusing so yeah Nevis' suggestion is a good one!

On an entirely personal level I'd like a chance to play Ash and Cori a bit more in episode 2 (Neither got much attention, though Ash is mostly my fault aha) ;) That's of course purely me haha not a general thing. 

What I'd like to see more is... I guess not even necessarily IC. Just all of us collaborating? So far a lot of it has been of site with titanpad, skype ect and I feel like the last few months I've had minimal contact with everyone else in this roleplay (partly due to titanpad not working on my phone, I'll admit). But yeah it'd be nice if we can all do things I guess! More player interaction! Yay!

Edit: Also that blue text is not good on grey :P :P