[@EthTenshi]: GM comments are in the quotes in your quote. [hider=EthTenshi] [quote=@EthTenshi] [b]UserName:[/b] EthTenshi [b]Character name:[/b] Sinys Luf'firio [b]Age:[/b] 13 [quote]Already mentioned the age.[/quote] [b]Mageblood type:[/b] Clima [b]Favoured Magic Class:[/b] Aeromancy [b]Previous Magic training:[/b] None [b]Race:[/b] Woodland Elf [b]Appearance:[/b] [quote]Where's his appearance?[/quote] [b]Short Bio:[/b] At birth Sinys had been branded blind by a powerful runic curse, his eyes clouded over to a unsettling maroon hue that strangely enough seemed pellucid. [quote] ~ More definition over the Runic curse, best to involve the Rune GM (Fallen) in it. ~Few things like: Where it come from, what was originally meant for, and how it ended up near a baby, what were all the effects and what happened afterward when people discovered he was cursed? ~Where did this Rune originate from? Does it have a bigger story? [/quote] This did not stop his parents from loving him and keeping him under their care by any means, in fact they somewhat coddeled him because of it. Until the age of five Sinys never considered that others around him could not feel things through the moving air around them, nor did it ever occur to his adolescent mind that they could not read a story of the scents in the air. As a matter of fact his sense of smell had been so keen and peculiar he could even tell the race and type of Mageblood they carried, but that had been apart of his curse and still to this day he does not know the differences in mage blood. Just the general smell each type gives off. [quote] *~ Nick the arcanite smelling, it’s too OP.[/quote] After he decided to ask his parents how they perceived the world, after finding out what had been considered normal Sinys kept his discovery to himself honing what little he had. One day he took up his father's Iron Wood bow deciding to practice, he smeared berries on the center of the target tree and fired his arrows until his hand felt no more. Feeling a fair sight foolish he trudged his way to the tree finding it by smell and had been amazed to see that all of his arrows had found their place. Only one of them had actually hit center, however this had been more than enough to spark his drive to become proficient with the art. [quote] *~ How does he shoot? Where does he learn? If not taught by his father, then how did he figure it out? Even talented archers aren’t so good at first to hit the same area with their first time with a bow. Practice is required and lots of it to hone and perfect the skill. It’s unlikely he could get that good, especially with a crippling weakness of blindness. Everything we do, even if he was born blind, is built on the fact the one using it can see. Take that into account with some of your skills and such because no one is going to make specialized things for a blind person since a way hasn’t been discovered yet. ~Regular Archers can see their targets, but as we’ve already established, he’s blind. Hitting a stationary target is all well and dandy, but moving, sentient, targets are another story. Smell is too vague to be accurate. Hearing...maybe, but how would you range things?[/quote] After two or three years time he decided to train something else, finding himself next to a forge he listen for hours on end to find the sound of a true strike. Something he had perchanced upon in a conversation lost to him by his father, the true ringing of metal struck perfectly. The sound soothed his worries of being the cursed one, the one with no abilities, the one still feeding from his mother's breast. Although the people in his tribe left him alone, and even though their sense of hearing should have been better than his own, he still heard every detail that they spoke of him. [quote] ~Knowing what a true strike sounds like is good, but what about it’s shape, folding metal, heating up, etc? ~Someone needs to be teaching him this rather than merely learning it through hearing and smell, including what the metals smell like, how to mold metal, mix it, etc. ~What were some of the issues he had when starting out, then how did he overcome them? Does he have a system for this and if you mess with it, does it mess him all up? [/quote] On his twelfth birthday he took his father by his hand and lead him down to his secret shooting range, at first his father had been amused letting his son try his hand at archery. However soon it had become quite clear that Sinys was a true marksman, perhaps not a great one yet, but it was in his blood. After a few of these father-son excursions Sinys told his father of his other sense, the air read ability, and how he could 'see' where air was thinner or in a thing. Also he told him how his father smelt funny, like a forge without ever going to a forge. It was then that he was taken home and his parents fought over him being sent to Twilight College, it wouldn't be until a year later that he was sent to the footsteps of the famed college with little more than the cloths on his back and a bow of his own. [quote] ~You agreed to bump up age, but some key points to keep in mind: How did he get to the college? Did he just bum around until he got to the college? Does he already know what the college smells like? Did someone give him a ride? The journey is just as important as the destination. [/quote] [b]Good Attributes:[/b] Can sense movement through air, natural or otherwise. Can detect lies through air circulation in people's blood in close proximity. Has a minor ability to smith, and smell out different ores that he knows. A strong sense of smell. A determined attitude that hates quitting. Can now taste the air if a smell is too strong. Adaptability in fair degrees. [quote] ~No lie detector ability since even advance and masters don’t have a reliable ability to do that.[/quote] [b]Bad Attributes:[/b] Overly strong sense of smell, a smell of either extremity can sway his demeanor and thoughts. Blind as a bat, hand motions, winking, opening your arms for a hug, none of these hold any meaning to Sinys. The rate of which your heart is beating tells him a bit more, but can also mislead him. Sheltered personality, can be overly shy when interacting with someone he knows nothing of. It turns out that the curse very slowly drains him until he is finished using magic for at least fifteen minutes. [quote] ~more detail over the drainage aspect. Arcanite, as it mentions in the magic section, is in everything. Why does it slowly drains him and in what way? Does it age him, does it make him sickly (as in casting magic gives him Blood Sickness period no matter what?), does it drain addition arcanite sources like his stamina rather than just his magic arcanite? ~More sensitive hearing is just that: More sensitive. He may be able to hear a fly fart, but he’d be hearing his own blood in his ears first. Smell and such too. Too much of something can be crippling. Loud sounds, smells, etc, will be more painful to him compared to others due to this so that’s a needed negative. [/quote] [b]Secret Word:[/b] Rebirth [/quote] [/hider]