[quote=@EthTenshi] [@Fallenreaper] Ooooo, I'm excited, I've been waiting to find someone who doesn't mind looking into the holes and asking about them. So. Necessary apologies first, forgiven or not ;D I made that at like three am, and forgot to find the picture. I don't normally get wrapped up in a good cs idea like this one, consider this one of my better ones, not the best though. Now explanations from the top. [quote]We're all human. The GMs are here to help with story, establish fairness and some sort of balance, and either make things work or give you other possibilities. That's not including keeping order but I usually assume that's automatically acknowledged. [/quote] Age: will edit. Appearance: Noted, said something, will look for as soon as I'm done with this. About the curse: I was more or less waiting to hear back to see what I was allowed to get away with before I expanded upon it, and will get with the appropriate GM about details and further things. I hope that I can use two runes, air and sensitivity. [quote]There's actually another option other than cursed as I'll mention in the PM. [/quote] About Archery: I'll add a few things like his father showing him how to hold the bow, but other wise I kind of mentioned that to practice he smeared a type of berry at where he wanted to shoot. Also further along I mentioned that he could find where things were by air flow, or even dead air, if I wasn't clear enough I actually meant the arcanite in his blood could feel where the air was. If that was overlooked or I miss wrote the importance of this I don't mind changing it if it is not allowed. [quote]One issue we had, and those comments are from all three, it seemed like you made it sound where he was overly talented for archery. Where he hit the tree with ease, albeit, not a bull's eye, and had no issues with using the bow in the least. For a blind person we found that rather hard without elaboration on the details and since your PC has been blind at birth, he would never have learned this before or have anyway to relate to such a thing. Even with the 'natural' talent of his magic which could've been triggered at birth, his understanding/control would be rather difficult since he's not had any real training. He treats it as a 6th sense from our understanding which is possible, but not easy. There's also many ways to explain his familiarity with a bow, like his father had begun to teach Sinys to repair the father's bow. This allows your PC to learn the bow by touch and its parts, feeling each aspect and getting an image how it's put together, how it works when properly done, etc. Then his father could've helped him, at the start, by telling him how a bow felt when drawn which could allow him to learn how a bow is used. Then Sinys could've done the shooting and practice on his own. Lucius and Rtron might be able to add more suggestions and such they believe might work as well. [/quote] About smithing: ok maybe saying that basic smithing is a bit too far for what I intended, as far as for what I meant for the future I had been hoping that the curse, if the aspect a fore mentioned was allowed. That as for shape, later through trial and error I intended for the heat radiation to tell him the shape through the air. Yeah all his major abilities kind of hinge on air detection/sensativity. My intentions for heating up, mixing, and other such things more or less relied on the memory that most blind people have about locations, and timings. That one was my bad for not saying haha. Although yes, messing up his system would make him have to botch that part of the program, if able to in the future I see a certain fallen orc torturing him by doing such things. If that character is still alive, and willing to put up with Sinys. Getting to the college: George Lucas on triple espresso, I'll think of something reasonable. Lie detector: Nix that sadly, but that was also air flow in blood cells. Speed demoting certain emotions, but not fine tuned, just to explain my reasonings. [quote]Some Races anatomy aren't like others. Naga for example have a ridge control over their emotions and also their anatomy has serpent elements in which can possibly influence stuff. In addition, individuals are all different and some are well practiced at lying down to an exact science where their body doesn't show any effects. So they would still be lying but he wouldn't be able to tell and personally, the GMs much rather not make every single NPC liar into the perfect one to counter this aspect and prevent things from being too soon. This pretty much means your PC will know the lies before everyone else and every time making surprises rather hard. [/quote] Drainage: Nope, just less arcanite, in stead of beginning to regenerate it he more or less is at plus/minus zero if that makes sense. Although when he actually is casting arcanite drains a bit faster for him due to the curse, if runes work that way. I brushed up to a certain point on that the first night. Also I saw something about one of the dragon types having runes engraved into his body, by the by that was my ulterior motive with the curse. A price to pay for help his mother had gotten previously in life. [quote]So less arcanite magic in his blood in general. One worry I have with this is that it can likely hurt him in later stages as he grows into Advance and Master, mainly because you have a set amount of Arcanite. You can see Khan, which I'm slightly flattered you used him for inspiration, isn't as powerful as a full, none rune demonomancer like Tyrael. If these two went head to head, full out and no holding back, Tyrael would most likely win in the end due to his flexibility since Khan's limited by his runes. However, both have the same arcanite amount.[/quote] Smell and hearing: smell I had included though not detailed I admit, hearing I forgot... I'll think of whether I want to botch that or if it is just a higher aspect of the curse. Also I was kind of thinking of that movie "Sensless" from 1998. Mind over matter type deal, then again I am referring to a comedy........ [quote]I don't think I've seen that movie so I can't fully relate or understand the humor I'm afraid. Either way, smell would still be a crippling weakness when encountered with intense scents. I should know as Zabrak, a race I play in SW, has blood hound like scent and strong scents like rot, perfumes, or intense/powerful scents can easily distract her and even hurt her sense of scent that breathing it in could cause her to flinch. I'm not sure if you intended this high of scent or something milder though for sure. [/quote] Otherwise thank you to [@EliteCommander] for that insight, and scratch the comedy comment... I think I covered everything? At least for deliberations, don't really want to move forward too much with out knowing if the main idea is acceptable. Thank you all for your time! [/quote] [quote=@EthTenshi] Oh god.... I've become.... A monster. My explainations are bigger than my CS.. *comical tears* [/quote] They still help the GMs, mine get rather lenghty tbh. So you're not alone in that aspect. In addition, Rtron and Lucius will most likely adding their thoughts and suggestions when they get the time.