[quote=@Savato] [@Absolis] He's cool, accepted. [@Letter Bee] Bee, if you breakdown because your character's ideal goals are not met then I'll be forced to kick you out. As for the Mary-Sue bit, I'll leave the benefit of the doubt. [@Archmage MC] If fatal moves knock her out and allow her to be trapped for a long time, I may get over the immortality bit, which is a lot more frowned upon here. What I won't turn a blind eye on is the surplus of abilities that you have here, a RP where OP stuff isn't so welcome, compared to the other one where Nova of all people is allowed. I'd recommend taking off the entropy one from the get go. Sharp fingers and w/e seem pointless when she can apparently morph her body parts anyway. While her personality has enough clumsiness and recklessness to not be a Mary Sue, the "You're going to have a bad time" counters this because, let's face it, any enemy is going to push her to that point in order to win. Meaning your character is a Mary Sue whenever a fight is [b]relevant[/b]. I don't know if Lmpkio accepted this edit in Light in the other RP but I get this bad feeling about it. [b]Conclusion:[/b] Old Light is fine if she can be knocked out. This is too much. [/quote] "Your gonna have a bad time." Is actually kinda hard to reach, because at that point your probably being sadistic like trying to yank her arms off/nails/fingers/general torture or something like that which isn't really combat. Or its a big boss fight where her lack of offensive power shows. xD At any rate she wanrs ya before she uses it, so just don't push her over the edge if its so worrysome xD. If you think Light is bad. My other character is basically a Magicka mage. which is sorta weird balance wise if you think about it. EDIT: But on second thought... hm... I'd like some sort of 'its a bit harmful to touch her' sort of thing, making intimacy a problem, but I also don't want it to be super OP either. Any ideas? (More so because the weakness makes technology act wonky, which means she has to carry a boombox if she wants to listen to music or something.) If not I'll remove it no prob.