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[@TheDuncanMorgan] of course, I will fix it right away
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Could it be that someone panicked? :P

Don't worry, i'm sure you can add to that simple intro so it fits the rp so far. Wouldn't be too difficult.

Just change up the facts, add some extra details and add a bit more flesh to his presence in the post.
With that i mean instead of.
[i]"They were saw caught up in it, that no one noticed the soldiers entering until they were right in front of them."[/i]
Make it more of a scene.

Make a description of their apparel, how they move through the crowded inn. Are they in a hurry? Are they bashing people out of the way? Are they barely making an effort at haste?

When the officer steps forward, describe him a bit. Is he fat? Is he handsome? Severe difference in apparel from the regular dudes? Just a sentence or two but it adds a lot.
So instead of that, perhaps.

[i]The guards stopped a few meters back from Lupus, while one of them, probably their officer stepped forward. A pot bellied man with a thin black mustache and a fancy hat.
-"Are you the wizard Lupus? The storyteller?" He was sweating a bit, and dried his forehead with a rag.
-"Why yes i am, is there a problem?" Lupus confusedly asked, he was not used to armed guards confronting him like this.
-"The palace officials have requested your presence to entertain at the party currently underway." The sweating man informed, Lupus was relieved that there was no actual problem.[/i]

Or something like that, actions, reactions, more spaced out instead of a wall of text.
I'm no writing genius myself but i try my best.

Also, they were [b]SAW[/b] caught up in it?
What? They were sitting there stuck in a handsaw? Misspelling is one thing but i frown a bit more upon misswording.
But you should be fine, i'm gonna assume you just spat out an intro when you thought there was a big hurry for you to post.