[quote=@Lexicon] [@Terminal] Good point. Hmmm...I think Kuro would be one of the few humans Triala was actually afraid of. Besides the Captain. He seems like the type, and he'd probably remind her of the high lord to a certain extent. Anyways, she'd definitely be on her best behavior whenever he was around. EDIT: Just out of curiosity, what is everyone's process for writing a post? I tend to just write non-stop, even if it doesn't make sense, before going back and editing the crap out of it. [/quote] That would explain why your character post always seems to exist in a perpetual state of 'edited 17 minutes ago.' :gray Mine is a bit more of a process of a deliberation. Piece together a single segment at a time carefully, make sure everything is exactly how I want it before I move on. I may occasionally backtrack in order to change or even remove entire segments to create better narrative flow.