[quote=@TheWindel]
I mostly said that you can cut down or cut out most of his equipment since it's really not necessary, though you can keep the explanation for his gas mask. Furthermore, I noticed you used a Pi measurement to describe the radius of his gravity. Maybe you could use something a little easier to understand to describe the distance of his field of attack.

Anything to add [@McFazzer]?
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[quote=@McFazzer]
[@TheWindel][@Savo] 

Not much to add really. I think using the word "radius" would be a simple substitute for Pi. Like Windel said, some of the extra descriptions of equipment were a bit unnecessary. 

That said I liked the inclusion of the combat style, it was a nice touch. But yeah, I basically have nothing to add :P
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At any rate, removed the contact lens from equipment, removed some unnecessary explanations/toned it down, and changed the footwear to make it rather weak on protection. Don't expect it to protect him from any attacks that slice, smash, or pierce... unless the weapon is really horrible, like a dull knife.

Fixed some errors that were minor, and the things you mentioned. I did not make any changes to the hoodie, with the exception of summarizing why he improved it. If you wish for this to be changed, just say the word.