[@HushedWhispers]

Just wondering on two things regard the Family of Ostwall.

1. From what I've read, the patriarch of is a ruthless warrior. Would it be fair to assume that the rest of the family is or has knowledge of combat/fighting as well?

2. How old is the princess be, or would that be up to the writer? I was hoping to go for an older teenager/ young adult age of maybe 18-20 or so.

[@Nevix]

I just glanced over, and thought maybe I can help.
For starters, you can remove the fullstop from the [.hr]
I also noticed that you have a couple of codes that are not closed or are in excess in the personality section that is also contributing to the formatting break.