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Please, pardon my stupidity, he actually has been deemed OK by us three, however there's a few points (just about your writing structure) that I'd like to discuss before you post his CS. I'll send the PM later.
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Alright then; whatever it is, I'll do my best to see it through! I look forward to criticism, advice, etc.

Also, looks like the princess of the skies returns?