[@TK421]Alrighty. Issues first.
1) The picture doesn't work. Either fix it or get rid of it.
2) Does Payton actually go to school at the moment or is he just working to save for college? You were slightly vague about that.
But other than that you're good to go.

Obviously you have something [i]hinky[/i] in Peyton's background. If you don't want anyone to know, you can PM me the addition information. What I'd like to know about is:
A) The Father's death
B) The mother's disappearance
C) The symbols on the jacket.