'Constructive criticism while you wait' strikes me as a sweet idea to keep in mind. Good call.

[@PlatinumSkink] Katherine and Kei were designed to be very close, each to some degree using the other to escape from isolation- Kei in her neglected social life and Kathy in her household. That said, spank me sideways if I didn't let the fancy prose-poetry style get the better of me while trying to write something vaguely evocative and end up just angsting straight onto the canvas. Ew.

I might reword their initial meeting to make their bond seem more mutual, and play out the idea that the two considered each other to be more than friends further than just keeping Kei's sexuality a vague neutral.

AND WOW. GOSH. I KNOW RIGHT. LOOK AT THOSE SAUCY, SAUCY STAT ROLLS. HASHTAG BLESSED.