[@Banana]
LoL Tlevran cries over losing a finger. Landon says [b][color=00aeef]"Don't worry about it,"[/color][/b] when he loses an arm.

[@Cuccoruler]
So seriously for the sake of the storyline (If there still is one) 
1. Was there a two week jump and are there two times going on now because Landon hasn't jumped yet. 
2. Have the Mycelings really developed 3000 years worth of technology and civilization with a population of 1000 in an afternoon? Because if so the Tari have just made leaps and bounds in technology thanks to them. The Tari are technological scavengers and will assimilate any technology. 
3. I haven't mentioned this, but the Tari travel long distances, by Akhlut through Landon's realm. It's too dark for any normal mortal to pass through, but the Akhlut have a special sense to allow them through. So they have seen this development if it is happening. 
4. Landon is still controlling the moon. 

Don't know if anyone really cares about any of this, but I do care about storylines and congruity, and as Slendy said, this could be a great story, but right now, it's a bunch of random writings, about whims we want to happen, so it's just sort of suddenly there. All of the elements of the story can be kept, but a little thought and consideration to the setting would help.