[@A Cute Angel] Good to go [@GrafRoy Zeppeli] Ink buff seems a bit weird to me, since your characters wish is focused around creation rather than restoration. I think there's a more unique way for you to support others than just a typical "buff" ability. Ink realize feels a bit weird if it's limited to just the elements. You may want to expand on how she got to poland and why, as well. [@PlatinumSkink] Throwing knives with a cloth seems pretty weird, but you're good. [@Lolita Complex] Good to go [@Antarctic Termite] I think you should reevaluate your abilities and go with something else. The paint motifs you have throughout your ability set are more fitting for a witch than a magical girl. Theme and coherency in your abilities is critical. Also, I'd suggest revaluating the dynamic between your characters heritage and her world view/how she acts/who she is as a person. [@The book of bad juju] Reorganize her magical ability so there's more distinction between the core ability and secondaries, but it's perfectly fine otherwise. Also, move the charisma bit to her wish. [@Flamelord] Good to go [@Ariamis] Your ability set seems a bit weird for madoka. I'd suggest looking for something else, or completly redoing it in a magical girl way. Also your secondary abilities shouldn't be greater tiers of your core ability, rather, they should be new applications and uses for it. [@kusanagifire] Separate your abilities a bit more so that there's a clearer distinction between core and secondaries. A bit weird for a magical girl but it's acceptable. [@Vocab] The soul rending stuff doesn't mechanically work. There's no soul to hit when you target a magical girls body.