Okay, so I need to make a history which I can do if I know a bit about the Fotian military, and Hanoxx/Niscent family history. Also need to add an Unknown weakness, any suggestions? I reason the following: Crown Prince Magnix Hanoxx's Father, King Hanoxx, has a younger sister who was married into the Niscent family in an attempt to strengthen relations between the two kingdoms. The Queen Allo Niscent's younger brother had this honor. Their Child is Eden, who would be the current King Hanoxx's first cousin, and Queen Niscent's nephew. Does this sound reasonable? [hider=My Skeleton App] Quote: Name: Captain Eden Niscent-Hanoxx Age: 57 Species: Descendant Blood%: 60% Tyro, 40% Oro Gender: Male Sex Preference: Heterosexual Height: 6'3" Weight: 202 lbs Physical appearance: [hider= Caution: Hot] [img] http://pre12.deviantart.net/3b05/th/pre/f/2014/350/8/a/raffle_prize_03_by_inupii-d8a4pci.png[/img] [/hider] Description: From his Tyro blood, a fair Skin tone typical of a Tyro, but with dense scales as hard as stone from his Oro heritage. Light blue eyes and long dark reddish-brown hair from a mix of Tyro and Oro pigmentations. A tall frame and powerful build honed by training, certainly physically appealing as he flaunts it off with what little he wears. A two dense pairs of draconic horns emerge from his temples curving back slightly over his ears tucked beneath his hair, they will continue to grow overtime and are nearly impossible to break off due to his Oro heritage hardening these, along with the claws on his fingers and toes. Apparel: Being of Tyro descent, Eden wears very little clothing. Merely an armless brassard over his right shoulder, and a red battle kilt for mobility. The lack of armor is scarcely a problem for one with a body as hard as stone, the brassard is just to prevent recoil damage when using his weapon at full potential. While he walks barefoot, a pair of bladed gauntlets are worn to help protect his hands from the heat his weapon can reach when used and useful in close-quarter combat to parry attacks. Occupation: Captain in the Fotian Army. Spells: (Lesser Pyromancy) Summon Flame: A spell to conjure fire from nothing, by consuming soul essence. Useful for a variety of purposes, from utility to offensive techniques. The greater the amount of fire produced, the more essence consumed. The flames act as normal flames, unlike other pyromancy techniques which use magical flames with differential properties. This also allows them to be extinguished by non-magical means, but do not require energy from the caster to continue to burn once finding an equivalent fuel source. (martial skill) Impossible Shot: A shot deemed impossible by others, made possible by pure skill. The ability to take a firearm one is trained in and work its mechanics as if like magic. Feats such as shooting the wings off a common gadfly at 100 paces, placing a hole in a tossed coin the at 500 paces, and silencing a screeching eagle in flight at 1000 paces, or a classic test of shooting through 12 wedding bands spaced at 100 paces each. These amazing techniques need focus and perhaps even some mental preparation to judge the distances, however a well timed shot can make all the difference. Abilities/Powers: Tyro 60% - Fire manipulation Oro 40% - Rock hard hide, claws & dragon wings. Hindrances: Tyro - 40% cold blooded Oro - 40% hard scales are heavier slowing them down including wings and hard to file claws. Unknown Weaknesses: Tyro - 60% overheats quickly. Weapons: Eden's Gunlance A cross of medium range and long range weapons, the Gunlance is Eden's weapon of choice. Quickly replicated and forged by Fotian blacksmiths after its effectiveness during the Dragon Wars, the standard gunlance is a standard weapon for ranked military personnel. In design, it is a steel lance, with a set of six barrel bored into the metal haft. While it trades pure strength behind the striking force due to the intricate machinery near the handle, it is this mechanism which allows the weapon to fire bullets from their barrels in a clockwise direction, six shots before requiring a reload by turning the counterweight such that the internal gearwork spins an outer ring of bullets and powder into the six chambers, loading up 30 shots total. A slowly smoldering piece of oil-cloth on a steel can be rotated into position behind the guard of the weapon is used then to individually fire each shot by igniting the powder when quickly pressed into the aligned barrel. The shots themselves are semi-accurate, although due to the design, each shot is off the actual center of the lance tip and instead fire around it which makes it both predictable and unpredictable depending on if the user rotates the lance while using it or not. All in all a useful weapon to take out enemies from a far, then use as a pike for midrange military combat. Compared to the standard issue Gunlance, Eden's Gunlance is definitely larger. Eden has modified his Gunlance to work with his abilities, requiring no ignition method and using his spells to produce the flames needed to directly fire each round. There are additional shots and powder, doubling his shot count to 60 shots. Furthermore, a gearspring switch allows him to wind the counterweight several times to store coiled energy to reduce the need to reload manually. This allows him to use his gunlance as a gattling gun in rapid bursts of firepower by holding the lance with both hands and holding it against his brassard to resist the recoil of firing so many rounds in rapid succession. This action usually overheats the weapon easily, hence requires some protection to avoid metal burns. [hider = IG stuff to be updated as Rp Develops] Personality: (nothing to commit for now) Vehicle: N/a Faction: N/a Pet: N/a Adv. App.: N/a Exp: (Not sure how this works) [/hider] History: [/hider]