[@rechonq]New. All the prior humans I've got ideas for. 

[@Temperance] Change the dead stars thing to something more like captured dead star essence or something. Dead stars are massive.

[@The Grey Dust] Its ok. You could add that since he is related to both royal blood lines he has a arrogant sense of ability. The other two hindrances you could make up on your own. Remember all weaknesses listed are automatic. They stack under your bloodline, the ones you list are unique to your character.