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Mary Beth: Wow. [i]Wow.[/i] Not only well written, consistent and in a strange way completely believable, but the writing style has sparked my creative mindset in a way that only my favorite stories could before. Wonderful character for a wonderful writer. 

Touma Yuniko: Alongside the deep seated need of mine for this character to destroy that illusion of hers, she seems a good contrasting match for Mary. 

Vitoria Alva: Ye gods. Unfortunately very believable, and promises to be a wonderful story driver. 

Beth Wilde: I don't mean any offense whatsoever, but the grammar bothers me. An unfortunate issue I have makes it difficult to finish reading about her, but from what I can gather, she sounds similar to Kyoko in terms of wishes. It'll be interesting to see what happens with her.

Monika Sakovich: A well-written shy archetype? Great, she's sure to be a good part of the dynamic between the MGs. Sounds adorable too, which is a plus.

Minerva Meyer: Very, very believable. If I didn't know any better, (and I don't, mind you) I'd say you actually are a precocious twelve year old girl, but talented in writing rather than medicine. A grasp of the mind is there that I wish I could match.

Kei Wentz: I can't actually follow what the hell the first paragraph is talking about. Introversion sees to that pretty well. Wow though, the writing style overall is beautiful. Perhaps that's the wrong word, but I can't think of a better at the moment. 

Ludmilla Alunyna: Original. Very much so. I can't notice an archetype from the first time reading it, which is always a good thing. 

Carina Lykke: Rare to see an eldest sibling that wants to simply be like the others instead of reveling in the responsibility. At least, rare from what I experience as stories. Can't wait to see how she interacts with everyone else.

Julia Steinhart: A mix of archetypes, but very promising. Well done archetypes are nonetheless well done characters, and she seems to be one.

Frederica Bernhardt: Please, [i]please[/i] write lore for games or stories. Simple, concise, but brilliant in usage of focus. More on the writing style than the character, but regardless.

Kazimiera (Kazia) Sienkiewicz: I can't seem to think of anything to say other than "well done." And so... Well done.  

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