I was going to say Aeron that you better skeedaddle if you wanted to gst a sheet up by Saturday, and it looks like you're well on your way!

Thunder, I actually got an early bit of criticism written down for your first sheet, but I'll definitely go and check it over again. Big things I noticed were the entirely too many professions in that ship position section, a huge gap in time that doesn't explain how she goes from idolizing her father to thinking him a total hypocrite, and the casual murder of fellow mercenaries with Eclipse. I'll go into more details in the review, but I think it's fair to give you some heads up that as stands, your character kind of comes across as a violent psycho that doesn't suffer any consequences for murdering her comrades.