[quote=@Thundercrash] [@Dervish] If "violent psycho" was how she initially came across, then clearly changes were needed. I was more going for someone who does the job she was given and doesn't care about anything else, unless you try to stab her in the back. Then she'll make sure you don't try it twice. Looking back, I think I may have misinterpreted something in the character sheet. What I was going for there was that, outside of the security role she was hired for, there are a few other things she could do in an emergency, but if there was someone else present that could do those things better, she would leave it to them. I just have this idea, as a species with such naturally long lives, asari have the opportunity to pick up a wide variety of skills, which would be rather useful for a mercenary. I'll probably be making changes over the next day or two. [/quote] Glad to hear it might have been a bit of a miscommunicated idea. :) My main concern is she seems to get away with killing people who cross her, even in her own organization, and something like Eclipse that would never fly because they're ruthless, but professional. They wouldn't trust or tolerate someone betraying their own, especially in situations where there's no witnesses. It's also better to have her leave them on good terms, because nobody would be too dangerous to go after if they had reason to want them dealt with. I look forward to the revisions! [quote=@AeronFarron] Thank you! Yeah, I noticed that after I saw the Character tab. But yeah, I think that would be a good point of reference. Especially since your character got a commendation for it, so there may or may not be a bit of initial hero worship/fan girl moment. XD [/quote] How to make Tanya embarassed and uncomfortable in 5 seconds: give her fanfare for the most traumatic event of her life. :D