[quote=@Dervish]
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Glad to hear it might have been a bit of a miscommunicated idea. :) My main concern is she seems to get away with killing people who cross her, even in her own organization, and something like Eclipse that would never fly because they're ruthless, but professional. They wouldn't trust or tolerate someone betraying their own, especially in situations where there's no witnesses. It's also better to have her leave them on good terms, because nobody would be too dangerous to go after if they had reason to want them dealt with.

I look forward to the revisions![/quote]

Yeah, I envisioned her more as the person who was sent to deal with problems like that, which was ultimately the reason for her leaving: she was tired of being the Eclipse's clean-up person. If there were any issues with her leaving, it would have been more along the lines of that, with gangs like that there isn't really any such thing as "retirement".