The Reviews are coming the Reviews are coming!

[@Kingfisher]
Hmmm very interesting concept and in general I really like the concept. Corps do dark and dirty things all the time and sometimes they do dark and dirty things to children, it's all just an ends to a means. Though I do have some questions I'd like to ask before I can give my hundred percent seal of super duper approval. 

The Horus Module how quick does it exactly work? Is it like she has to watch the skill be performed over various instances to fully understand it or is it more like just watch the person once and then boom you are a master at kung-fu? And does it work for full sets of skills like Martial Arts as a cohesive whole? Or would she have to watch each move be performed individually one by one.

The Second Question revolves around how does she deal with not becoming a C-Freak without the use of Neurotop? Because with a highly advanced neurlogical implant and a fully synthetic body the stress on her brain is going to be quite high. So I'm assuming either the Horous Implant helps dampen the symptoms, or the Synthetic body is base grade (looks almost completely human but the cybernetics inside are not super ones so that she has would only have the normal strength, speed et cetra of an everyday joe just a tad bit more durable and with much more trouble in metal detectors? XD) Would I be right in assuming either of these options?

Once you answer those we will be all good to go!


[@NuttsnBolts]
Well it wouldn't be a cyberpunk story if somebody did'nt have a toxic/harmful/fucked up relationship know would it? But honestly I like the character and the potential she has to develop throughout the story. But that does not mean, I do not have questions. Well I have one question really. What is Rachel's handle? Or is Rachel Morton an alias in its' self? because while in Julius' gang people may still use their regular names when your a diver everybody uses some kind of nickname when they are diving because you want to distance yourself as much as you can from your "regular life" in case the corporations catch wind of you and you need to go dark. If you could just answer me that question, everything else is good!

[@Atrophy]
YOU BROKE ALL THE THINGS! YOU FOOL! Nah, nah I'm kidding, I'm kidding Blank is actually a really compelling character (or at least I do), the bastard remnants of yet another company that got swallowed by the ravenous sea of competition. And you captured the idea of Spooks very well indeed this odd mixture of something alien and strange combined with something still human. Of course Blank seems to be showing much more signs of humanity than the newer spooks who have gone more alien than human these days. (Shame on him for being a defective early model!) But everything looks good on my end! Accepted.