I like it. Don't see any mistakes, so you should be good to go. Just gotta wait on Lennon to see where he wants you, but since we just met up with Squad 9, you'll probably have been a member of that squad. Maybe get shifted to ours due to Squad 4 being smaller and Evan needing another body or two to properly operate the recoilless rifle on the APC? I dunno.

Anyways, you have co-gm approval.