Maybe you should have added that to her History than xD.


This she-cat was born outside of Ashclan, hailing from the hills not far from Cliffclan territory. It was a small place, a good clan not far from the other clans that they lived. It was long after she'd become a warrior that the end came to them and she was seperated from the other survivors. She found her way to Ashclan. 

Didn't hint much of... a exterior plot to it.