[quote=@Legion02] Made my first post. I'm really sorry it's not on the same level as everyone else when it comes to writing. It's just that it's really hard for me to write so abstract. I promise that the writing will improve as the universe is created and stuff is less abstract as it is now. [/quote] [quote=@Hael] I agree. I hate super-abstract stuff like this. I'm just gonna write "Vulamera was born and she is smart and intelligent and the end" :lol [/quote] Truth be told I struggle to even understand what is trying to be said when the topic is so abstract and things so vague. As such I just tried tried to call to mind imagery as Zephyrion formed himself so as to emphasize that. I left out any vague and hazy memories of a past life, both because that's not my style and because I imagine Zephyrion as being new. Fresh. A manifestation of this blank slate's very desire to fell change, not the reincarnation of Ialu or some other tyrant.