[quote=@Hael]
[b][b][i][u]Any and all input is appreciated![/u][/i][/b][/b]
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[s]Needs more Chaos.[/s]

It was good, I liked it! Got the essence of a distant observer quite nicely.

Though, what I am wondering is why she's going to venture back into Vestec's mind if the first one burned her so badly. XD