[quote=@Rtron] [s]Needs more Chaos.[/s] It was good, I liked it! Got the essence of a distant observer quite nicely. Though, what I am wondering is why she's going to venture back into Vestec's mind if the first one burned her so badly. XD [/quote] Awww, thanks, distant observer is what I was going for, of course. It's who she is. But, the thing about Vulamera is that she's too curious for her own good. She'll get interested again, and eventually ask to see his mind once more. She'll try and resist being effected, of course, but Vestec might over-power her :lol