Okay, do not fully judge this yet as it is clearly not complete - I still need to add the powers and abilities and I want to note the notable NPC's and rogues that'll be making an appearance. I also might expand and improve on the ending of the origin. Speaking of which, I really do apologize for the just plain shitty writing that occurs in the final section of the backstory and origin. I didn't like what I had first written, and once I had deleted it and begun rewriting it my brother started rushing me to finish and it turned out rather poorly. That's also the reason why this took longer than expected to type out as I kept rewriting things, that and formatting issues that occurred when I transferred what I had just typed up on a word document to here, which took a further hour to amend. ... Anybody ever notice I'm always critical of my applications? Never happy with them, ever. Whatever. The CS has been added to my first post on page 1 (the fourth post of the OOC), you can see it there.