[@j8cob]

Both of your characters are good in pretty much everything (*note to self: create a Freddy-based Youkai*), except one part, powers.  Your second character (Erisa) is ok (lower the range of her shots a bit, though), but the first one is way too strong in my opinion. Here are some points of concern:

- The amount of power he can "generate" is too big, I can't simply have a beginner character that has a power that is unlimited, even if it requires some time to charge. You can make it a quicker charge but lower it to a reasonable quantity of power a lightning's worth of power is already strong enough IMO.

- The fact that he can charge power without any visible signs is way too OP and, senseless as well. At the very least he should have one of these classic electricity user side-effects (sparks flying around him, a distinctive electric buzz, or ozone smell), naturally the size of the charge influences on the scale of the side-effects, so he can charge up to a certain portion of his power w/o looking like it, but when the power reaches a certain point (say, around a power line level) there should be an indication of what's going on, otherwise it's too strong for my tastes.