[quote=@Lolita Complex] [@Draconequis] I honestly don't like it. The over the top smilies and capital letters in their sheet certainly lowers my opinion of you as a writer. The core idea of it being a rock is amusing. Everything else is kind of lame. [/quote] Ahh i see your point. [@BCTheEntity] wellp time to make some edits then *shrugs* (The whole point of the character sheet of Raven was that it was supposed to be filled with random emoticons and capital letters, it was kind of supposed to be because he's a rock and can't show his own emotions on his face. I could see where that would bother someone. So im going to edit those out and make some changes to his other form.) anyways, im going to do an edit here, maybe just leave him a rock, and screw the whole final form thing. Im definitely a good writer, i will prove it in the Rp. I was trying to go for a different style. hell whatever.