[@Alina13] Hey! Thanks for submitting. It seems you didn't read through all the information in the OP of the OOC. I would like you to do that before revising the character to something I can accept. 
A few things that I would like you to change:

* No mind control. Literally that example is stated as a no go in the OP.

* You only get one power. And it has to be a very limited power. You can find a more detailed description in de the OP, plus some examples. You could also read through the characters of the others for inspiration and to find out what has already been taken. Control over the weather would be too much. Plus creating a breeze is already the power of another character. So I would like you to change that. Think more in terms of something that could be considered bad luck, when you use it on someone. 

* Grimbold is not a music teacher indeed, normally I would ask you think of another way your character came into contact with him. But we can go for the option that she's new to the group. So she has yet to meet Grimbold. We can work with that. 

* That would also work for the relationship part. That part is only meant to describe relationships with other PLAYER characters, as they already knew each other before the RP started. So you can erase that part, and if you want to hang on to it, perhaps you can find a way to weave it into her backgroundstory. Since your character will be new (storywise), she doesn't need to have a relation established with any of the other characters yet. 

* Though introverted and extroverted don't necessarily cancel each other out in real life, they can roughly be considered opposites. Making your character have both traits, gives her less depth instead of more. I'd like you to at least replace one of them with something else, or find another way to describe what you mean for her. This thread might help with some insight on that topic: [url=http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/85381-how-to-make-people-other-then-yourself-like-your-character/ooc]3 commandments for character creation[/url]
Also, 'wise' is not really a personality trait, but more of a qualification. Like saying somebody is physically strong. (And deep thinker seems similar and rather vague) More on this, you can find here: [url=http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/90258-how-to-rp-certain-traits/ooc]how to RP certain traits[/url]
All in all I'd like you to rethink her traits. 

So while I don't mean to scare you off with these demands, I do need to get a feeling that we're on the same wavelength. That you understand not only the rules but also know what's going on. I definitely share these [url=http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/91646-biggest-rp-pet-peeve/ooc]pet peeves[/url] And I would like people to [url=http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/81521-actually-reading-peoples-posts/ooc]actually read each others posts[/url]. Starting with the OP in the OOC. It's up to you to decide whether this is a standard that you can meet. 

That being said, I do like you to join the RP and I appreciate the effort you already took by filling out the CS. I'm looking forward to your revised character.