I just felt like i should put a word in here about my piece. My primary inspiration was the Kim jong Un skits by college humor. I tried to make something similar, and i guess it was funny enough to get a few chuckles here and there which was my hope all along. :D For anyone noting a lack of writing diversity, or simply feeling it got a bit stale towards the end. Spot on. This was written in a single sitting, i just wrote down what popped up at the top of my head and sent it going. I think i perhaps read through it once when i was done before sending it in. If i ever wanted to produce real quality writing, i'd need a proofreader. But this was just me goofing around with the theme and hoping for a few laughs. So there it is, thanks for the feedback :D