[@Otaku95]

Everything is looking good, but could you add to his history if you can?  He seems to have a very similar history to Nia (the octopus girl) maybe if you put something in about where he is now.. maybe a bit more about his family life in order to make the stories a bit more differing.  (i am aware multiple people are abused by their parents, but the idea that he killed his abusive father is very similar to what happened to Nia)  I would really prefer if each character sort of had a more unique history.  Feel free to PM or mention me as soon as you finish.

[@CloseEnough]

welcome to the RP, accepted.