[@Atrexiel]

I think I tend to do well concerning writing but I'm only human and am prone to making mistakes or focusing on something that might not be all that interesting. I'm worried that I focus too much on minor details that true substance. That's why I was worried it sounded dull.

I wanted to make Angie a pushy character who has a huge issue with being over protective of her friends. I plan on using Laura's roommates a lot. 

I'm glad you like her. :D

Coolness, if you need any help, let me know. ^_^