[@DarkwolfX37][hider=Feedback on Violet Black]I must admit, I do not believe that the Incubator would tell the “fine print” of the contract which she’d take. I am pretty sure that an Incubator would simply pretend that Magical Girls just vanish if they don’t take care of their Soul Gems with suitably vague sentences like “Your life will end”, which isn’t technically a lie. … Though, Violet may be intelligent enough to figure out the truth on her own before even making her wish, and assuming that this might be possible. However, I can’t ever remember a time where an Incubator has ever said “That wish is impossible”. Well, except the one time he went “That wish shouldn’t be possible!” yet it happened anyways. Honestly, I think the “I wish magical girls, after becoming witches, returned to normal humans and didn't die when they were killed as witches” might actually be a BETTER wish than the one Madoka made at the end of the show. ‘Cause, it can’t be a challenge for the Incubators to just make an additional girl into the world, could it? Oh, well. I have absolutely zero idea what an Incubator does if a wish is “beyond the capability of the Magical Girl”, since neither Magica show I’ve read/watched has any examples of that. Hah.

Other than that, that’s a pretty intimidating character you’ve made there. Even if she didn’t learn of the truth before transforming, her wish itself makes it so she instantly learns the truth anyways. Lies and deceit are no use against her, eh? Does that mean she’d instantly locate a hidden Monika? Haha. Poor girl, her one advantage can get instantly cancelled. In any case. You’ll also get to ask people of their weaknesses and planned futures, because you need them as you can see them instantly. Gosh. XD … Still, yeah, it’s your wish and as such it’s your privilege to do so. It’s a nice wish, and one I can definitely envision a character such as yours making. … Gosh, that’s a harsh story. You sure she only has 21% despair after all that? Gosh. Just… just gosh. In any case. I rather like it, although I’m unsure how it will play in the game itself. I wish you good luck. Haha.[/hider]