So, how does this look? I'm personally unsure about the legibility of this character, but... I'll post it anyway for advice. [hider=I'm not sure I like this backstory… Eh..] [center][img]http://vignette2.wikia.nocookie.net/dragonball/images/5/58/Anime_girl_with_headphones_render_by_feary_bad_day-d5slag2.png/revision/latest?cb=20130305234922[/img][/center] [h1][center][colour=Lavender]"I would rather not fight you if it can be avoided."[/colour][/center][/h1] [b]Name:[/b] Iwa Kolanowska [b]Age:[/b] 15 [b]Appearance:[/b] [hider=Magical Girl stuff!] [img]https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/236x/37/f1/c0/37f1c03353b0bb529b9319b134bc216c.jpg[/img] Soul Gem Shape: Magnet Gem Colour: [colour=Lavender]Lavender[/colour] Gem Location: Contact Lens [/hider] [b]Nationality:[/b] Polish, born and raised. [b]Personality:[/b] Lidia is a determined, slightly shy girl with a big(ish) heart. She isn't overly malicious, but she isn't afraid to take drastic action if she is required to. She takes being a Magical Girl very seriously, even if she hasn't been one for very long. Thanks to her experience, she lost the consciousness of her body, despite still keeping up appearances. She is still training, and has been trying to spend more time fighting Witches. However, it's still hard for her, and she isn't very experienced at [i]winning[/i], and more [i]losing[/i]. [b]Afflictions:[/b] None yet [b]Wish:[/b] [colour=Lavender]"I wish people would stop being mean, and just be attracted to me... I want them to be my friends, not my enemies!"[/colour] This wish made her a center of attention, and pretty much caused everyone she met to like her. However, it also attracted a lot of unwanted attention (read bio). Her wish, though, seemed to relate to her emotions, as after the incident the effects seemingly wore off. [b]Biography:[/b] Lidia was born as the only child in Danzig. She has spent all her life so far living with her parents, so there was almost nothing to trigger the Incubators arrival. When it did arrive, though, Lidia had been living through a time where she was constantly bullied. It was mainly because of her tastes in music, fashion, entertainment, everything. When the Incubator did come, bearing a wish, she spent a while considering. She refused to make a wish to fix the bullying, since it would mold her to be a stronger person. However, past that type of wish, she could think of no alternatives. So, she made the wish, making sure to word it carefully as to not cause problems. The next day of school, people flocked to her, talking with her, complimenting her tastes; being genuinely friendly for the first time. There was a significant increase in people asking her out, writing love letters, etcetera - all of which she turned down. She felt she wasn't ready for a relationship at that time. About a couple months after becoming a Magical Girl, and still being terrible at Witch killing, she was attacked. It was some guy from a higher year, who she had previously turned down. Quite harshly me might I add, even though she didn't mean to. He drugged her with something, and forced himself onto her. When she awoke, she realised something inside of her; a determination she never knew she had, past her broken spirit and terrified mind. It made her realise what people were like, and what she would have to do to be stronger. Lidia had her parents enroll her in self-defence classes, which she excelled in, and she eventually moved on to sword fighting. As she did, though, her hold on people around her began to deteriorate. Her [i]friends[/i] left, and the bullying resumed. Her wish collapsed in on itself, but she refused to let it break her. It's been about a year, and she is still bad at killing Witches. Somehow, the training just hasn't translated. [b]Skills:[/b] Just gonna keep this short. She is excellent at sword fighting (and I mean, very, very good. Scarily good. She could cut your head off in a flash with her blade, so… Don't get on her bad side). She is a very skilled fighter, especially self defence wise, and has a high pain tolerance. She is decent at academics, and has quite high stamina. As well, she is quite determined and charismatic, so she could be a leader if she really wanted. She is still shit at Witch killing. [b]Threads of Fate:[/b] 5 [b]Magical Weapon:[/b] [hider=Weaponry!] [img]http://orig12.deviantart.net/16bc/f/2008/121/0/f/vortex_sword___anime_style_by_grimthor.jpg[/img] [/hider] A short sword, with a long enough hilt to double as a spear. The sword always has a magnetic attraction to Lidia, so she can retrieve her weapon from seemingly anywhere. She also has a metal gauntlet on her left hand, which is used as a type of shield. [b]Experience:[/b] 2 [b]Magical Ability:[/b] [b]Magnetos:[/b] Lidia can create and control a magnetic charge, which she can manipulate within a small radius around herself. This ability allows manipulation of metallic objects, even those that are not normally affected by magnetic influence. As well, by overworking the ability, she can cause static build up and create electricity, which she can also manipulate (think the Emperor Palpatine in Star Wars 6, provided there is enough build up before hand). This electricity can be stored in somewhat of a buffer, to be used at a later date. [i]Secondary - Leaps and Bounds:[/i] By utilising the static build up, Lidia can give herself controlled electric shocks to stimulate parts of her body. Thanks to this, she has seemingly unlimited energy, and can fight long after she should have been put out of action from fatigue or injury. She can use it to give herself different sensations, elicit different emotions, and cause a variety of other effects. [b]Signature and Finisher:[/b] ██████: 15% [/hider]