[quote=@CommisarJhon] Name: Revalda Petanus Gender: Male Age: 47 Race: Human Appearance: [img]http://i.imgur.com/UKP7O1k.png?1[/img] Rank: Jedi Master Skills: Has mastered [b]Shien [Form V][/b] using both standard and reverse grip and is advanced at [b]Ataru [Form IV][/b], he also has basic skills with [b]Shii-Cho [Form I][/b], [b]Teräs Käsi[/b] and blaster weapons Force Powers: Has mastered [b]Telekinesis[/b] and is advanced at Force Augmentation and Force Deflection. Also knows [b]Force stealth[/b], [b]Force healing[/b] and [b]Jedi mind trick[/b]. Weapons and Equipment: Revalda uses [b]Standard Jedi Lightsaber Grip with Synthetic Yellow Crystal[/b], even tough yellow crystal is used mostly by Jedi Sentinel, Revalda used yellow mostly becasue as he said: [i]"It represents happiness, intellect, energy and honor in my soul."[/i] Revalda also carries [b]Blaster pistol[/b] usually with him incase if he or some one else needs weapon and/or to use as ranged weapon as a alternative to throw objects with Telekinesis. He also carries [b]small bag of medicine[/b] and [b]water[/b]. Bio: Revalda was born in Aldera, Alderaan. As a young leans he will live out his childhood in Corusant and in the Jedi temple. He was appointed to master Laurentius Duilius who he fought together even after being knighted until his master died at the Skirmish of Sullust [Its was before Battle of Sullust]. At least 1 year into the Clone Wars Revalda had become jedi master, later he was given a command of 25th Infantry Brigade, but at the Clone Wars end order 66 was given. [Since im not sure if i can be captured jedi, ill make two versions so i wouldnt need to edit later] Captured Version: Tough Revalda was lucky to survive, he was forced to surrender in planet of Kashyyyk, being captured by his own brigade. Now hes waiting for execution, tough his insticnct tells that something will happen. Not Captured Version: Tough Revalda was lucky to survive, he was wounded by clone troopers that he lead. Now Revalda is hiding from hunting clone troopers/storm troopers and mercenaries, hoping that one day balance is restored in the force. Personality: Revalda is calm and honorable jedi master whos ready to defend innocent and comrades from threat. [I might add some more stuff to my characther, but thats enough for today.] [/quote] Maybe tone down how many force powers he has. Or at least don't make him so adept at such. I understand he is a jedi master, but I really don't want to have everyone start so powerful. Also, you will be captured at the start. Know that you will not start out with your weapon on you, but you will get it back.