I'll get to it today. :0 EDIT: I would just like to request you post in Third Person, as it's easier. Other than what Prince mentioned, I see no problems with the character. Okasho requires advanced chakra control the which shouldn't be in the hands of a Genin. You could have your character developing Chakra Enhanced Strength, but even that would be modest and unrefined this early on. That would be your character working up towards Okasho. Everything else is good to go.