[quote=@Dawnscroll] Ouch. Okay, that one genuinely hurt. :/ I know its in good fun and all and the character is an asshat, but I was actually a smidgen proud of that scene. I'm not exactly expecting praise for my writing, but can we tone down a bit on actually tearing my idea apart? [/quote] And you should be proud because the scene was awesome. I wish I could put as much anger (or any emotion) in a post as that one. Don't take this as a bash on the quality of your writing, the idea or the character. Its just that it fitted the meme so well... Eitherway, I won't do anything similar anymore, don't worry.