[quote=@Dawnscroll]
Ouch.

Okay, that one genuinely hurt. :/ I know its in good fun and all and the character is an asshat, but I was actually a smidgen proud of that scene. I'm not exactly expecting praise for my writing, but can we tone down a bit on actually tearing my idea apart?
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It's only directed towards the character, not the writing or idea.