[quote=@Crimson Raven]
As a side note, what do you guys think of the first-person perspective? Does it make the character seem more alive, or does it make the events hard to follow? Neither? Both? Other?

I'm trying to vary my writing style a little, and I have found that the first person is the easiest and most fun to write.
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Well Ferrin is basically Harry Copperfield Blackstone Dresden so the first person feels pretty natural to me.