[quote=@Blue Demon]
I need some constructive criticism please.

This paragraph just wont fix. If anyone can give pointers that'd be great. (I don't think context is really needed because it's self explanatory. If not, ask and you shall receive.)

[hider]Then he woke up in the future. A future that threatened to take Steve Rogers away from him. It grabbed at him with needy hands and a voracious appetite. Steve had struggled a lot those first couple of months. It had been Lex who had saved him. Lex who came up with the idea of the Justice League. And how to save Steven Rogers. Lex had introduced the idea to Steve slowly. To let him warm up to it. It was a simple idea. In a future of fear where people hid behind computers or masks, he would stand out in the open as both Steve Rogers [i]and[/i] Captain America. He had no more need of a secret identity. All his friends and family were dead. [/hider]
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[hider=This is what I'd do, feel free to use, change, ignore, etc:]
-Switch those last two sentences and put a ; between them rather than actually having new sentences. 
-There's a lot of short sentences there, maybe try putting different sentences together rather than having them so short.
-'Needy hands and a voracious appetite', I'd just focus on one of these and extend the metaphor. 'A future that threatened to take Steve Rogers away from him, this new reality would eat away at his identity until there was nothing left.'
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